Friday, May 22, 2009

Murals

He was your average 5-year-old boy, turning the walls of his home into one giant canvas, much to his mother's displeasure. He drew what other 5-year-old boys drew: Techy stuff mostly... Dams and Power stations, Pylons and cables. One of his mother's cousins once remarked that the stairway wall had the whole Laxapana Complex sketched on it.

Among these carefree drawings, one curious sketch stood out. In the back wall near the fuse-box, hidden from view almost. A long straight road led to a tall building... a burning building. A side-road led to another building, which wasn't in flames. Seeing his parents puzzled looks, the boy explains, pointing at the building on the side-road: "That's where mama works!" with a look of innocent relief on his little face.

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He remembers that sound... deafening, metallic, very very scary. Louder than the loudest thunder. The teacher was getting a bit nervous... "Madam, sounded like a train collision..." she tells the other teacher. They both stare out the window, at the railway tracks and the greenish Indian ocean. All they see is black smoke, menacing black smoke, rising from the distant Fort.


And just like that, school was over! Although school looked more like it was having the concert, because everyone's parents were there!! His parents put him into the back seat of their car, and till they got to Park road, his mother was constantly on the cellphone. "I can't get to him, the lines are all jammed..." she said to his father, lying the phone down. What a wierd combination of words? "Jam in the lines"? He chuckeled at the insanity, yet he chuckeled silently, to himself, a mental chuckle. There was something very very worrying about his mother's tone...


The first thing they do when they get home is switch on the TV. A dazed looking news presenter keeps mentioning a lorry and a bank. A fire leaps out the windows of a tall building. A couple of firefighters on a lift pull a man out a window. There's utter chaos, bodies, glass shards everywhere, people lying on the ground, bleeding like water fountains. The boy can't get the images out of his head. He wakes up suddenly that night, the burnt corpses won't go out of his head. He walks up to his parents bed, and cuddles up between his mother and father. No creepy corpse can get to him in his mother's warm arms.......


.hopefully.

14 comments:

  1. GET_BACK_TO_YOUR_BOOKS OR NOT EVEN YOUR MOTHER'S WARM ARMS WILL PROTECT YOU !!!

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  2. Touching!!!


    What the hell you doing here, CHAVIEEE!!!!!!

    Get to the books. Yet still missing your ramblings. =S

    Shoo Shoo now GO!

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  3. LOL @ others!
    :D
    *joins in*
    VERY NICE ONLY, exams around the corner AND YOU'RE WRITIN' ABOUT YOUR ARSONIST FANTASIES!
    Shoo shoo! *gestures with a broomstick*

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  4. Ok you can post one per month till exams are over. Not more than that :)

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  5. hehehe... guys I owe everyone an explanation I think... :D very very stupid of me to post this last night, especially since I had an exam today, but that's what happens to me when exams get close, my mind wanders off to other things... ;) the guitar that I barely ever touch somehow becomes an extension of my body almost, and I start drawing maps, maps and more maps (or flags, since I really suck at drawing proper stuff... lol)

    anyways, my next exam is going to be on the 10th of June, so getting some rest before classes start again on Monday... :)

    Thanks again everyone, Tulie, St. Fallen, GG, Kirigalpoththa for commenting. And you too Maks, and btw the arsonist fantasies - duuuude you don't know how close I've come to burning down the house... will write a post about it! hehe ;D

    anyways, thanks again. take care everyone! :)

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  6. When exams are closer you become a fan of everything! surely music /art would be a front runners..

    Also it is the time for ideas! You get millions of ideas that you can do after exams.. Just keep a note of those :)

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  7. Kirigalpoththa - yes music and art, should note down the ideas, thank you! :)

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  8. Hello Chavie, gotta say you've a nice blog here. This is my 2nd time visiting and good to see you've started posting again.

    Then again.. after reading all the feedback it seems like you're having exams these days so.. firstly Best of Luck with all your exams! and secondly, I agree with others.. exams always come first.. so blogging and other pastimes can wait a while.. ^__^

    And finally about this post.. must say your writing style is very interesting, unique and nice. Do post more of such stories.. But only after your exams are over.. =D

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  9. thank you very much for the comment Harumi! :D yes, the exams will take percendence over blogging, so this blog won't see much action in the next 2 weeks...

    Thank you for the compliments and your wishes! tc! :)

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  10. No action for 2 weeks eh? then how come I see another post up! lol

    Anyway you're welcome.. ^__^

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  11. Well you know... I find more time to study these days because the IPL ended! :D So that leaves some time for a bit of blogging too... ;)

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  12. What does IPL gotta do with your studies? =P

    And if that ended, it only means you've got more time for studying and not blogging! =D

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  13. Well, now the World 20 20 Championship has started and I don't have any time to do anything anymore... lol :D won't be blogging for a few more days me thinks... hopefully! ;)

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